Is this something I wrote in 4th grade? That’s for me to know and you to find out.
I rushed down the steps and through the door to the pool party. Just when I thought I wouldn’t make it I wiggled in the hula hoop contest. But the biggest surprise is that I won! And for a prize, I picked out a pink flamingo with sunglasses! It was really funny. After, we did the Mocorana and my dad did it too(that’s a surprise!) We also did a mummy wrap contest with toilet paper. It looked as though the toilet paper attacked and won!
I sniffed the scent of hamburgers sizzling on the grill. I was famished! I gulped my food when I heard the DJ announce “JUMP IN THE POOL I’LL THROW PRIZES.” Everyone dashed in the pool as fast as their feet could carry them. The herd of children trampled the concrete and hit the water all together. A prize flew into my direction but it was also in the direction of the girl next to me! We struggled for the same prize and finally she let go of her grasp. “ummm” she whimpered. I offered it back even though she didn’t accept it, I felt I had too prizes, one in my hand, and the pride in my heart.